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Melancholy

O Melancholy, my home-alone friend, with Indolence conspiring to mark time, with best intentions, and thoughts unpenned, and faded vision, as the perfect rhyme, so almost, so not quite, so very close, distracted by my wastrel amigos. If I could somehow loosen ties that bind, and hold me in such unrelenting thrall, if I the secret antidote could find, to let me hear again the muse’s call, my mind, now free, a-roving, unconcealed, my deepest unsung thoughts in verse revealed. Unending sojourn, inspiration sought, and sometimes unexpectedly upturned. When with the souls of poets we have walked, their intimations shared, insights discerned, if we, as in a dream, a trance adopt, we too may tread their lofty mountaintop.

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Date: 2/16/2023 5:03:00 AM
Can't help but love the beauty again of this Peter. It has an extremely lulling quality, though it's of sadness. You write so beautifully about aging. I'm sure I'll return to this several times to find all the layers of meaning expressed. You certainly could create a collection on the themes of aging and loss that is likely to be appreciated widely. Your work is exceptional.
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/16/2023 7:39:00 AM
Perhaps getting old is something I do know a bit about ! And yes the poem speaks of loss, particularly the loss of inspiration and the feeling I’ve been abandoned by my muse. I’m so glad you enjoyed reading this one and thank you for your encouraging comments.

Book: Shattered Sighs