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Melancholia

Mournful melancholy makes her miserable, Murky moods move her to morosity, She's miffed and morbid, her mind is mourning, Moping about in mellow melancholia, Marred in misery, misty-eyed, she's mortified, Melting in maddening malaise of malcontentment, Malfunctioning malignancy has made her mean, Melodramatic memories magnify her misfortune, This monotonous, mundane, mirthless morning, She's a mangled mess of merciless moaning, A mere mortal mutilated by melancholic musings. 9th May 2023 Contest: Anatomy of Melancholy Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 5/9/2023 12:09:00 PM
Mmmm, marvelous meanderings! Mostly m's! Many melancholy moments make more misery. :) Sorry, you pulled me in, this was fun, though a sad topic :) I love how you did this poem! :)
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Date: 5/9/2023 4:30:00 AM
Hello Joanna! This is a lot of alliteration! Almost a tongue twister. I enjoyed my read. Just thought Id pop in for a quick read. Have a wonderful day young lady.
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Date: 5/9/2023 2:30:00 AM
I love the description here - and, of course, the em, em, em . . . Thanks, JD.
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Date: 5/9/2023 2:25:00 AM
- This condition is really a broken mess of relentless moaning and pain, Jo - Deeply described - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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