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Megan :)

her eyes like perfect, flawless diamonds shine, so pure no single imperfection marrs, i never knew of something so divine, their raiant twinkle rivals that of stars. her voice is like a choir of angels' song, a song that leads to beauty so complete, *it draws you in, time stops and then elongs, a mind so great, with figure so discrete. her hair a dark cascade of chocolate brown, sleek and smooth, reflecting solar light, a light that brings a smile to ev'ry frown, it brings to mine that of a child's delight. she has the love of every man she sees, i am euphoric she has chosen me! john whitty

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Date: 1/31/2016 8:43:00 PM
WELL DONE JOHN............SKAT
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Date: 7/4/2009 4:50:00 PM
You got over this 'Sarah' person quite fast didn't you.....
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Date: 5/12/2009 12:04:00 PM
its good you feel that way meg, tho yours makes me just as happy :)
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:37:00 AM
Yes we did both join Poetry Soup at the same time :) I love this poem so much. It makes me smile and cry every time I read it xxx
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Date: 5/7/2009 2:58:00 PM
John, This is a most beautiful love sonett. Megan is a lucky girl. I was wondering, Did you both join poetry soup at about the same time? There's a Meg that wrote a sweet love, poem, too. Keep writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Love Dane.
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:36:00 PM
Small gem of poetry.... really enjoyed reading it. enjoy your day.
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