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Meeting You

enoughter year has come and gone life left me a sight of hope meeting you was like a story told. just enougher oh day nothing anew the same old things i alway's went threw . the same old day the sun dident shinne ,but life was a surprize when your hand touched mine the connaction of us spirked like a fire of burning to know our hearts desire's . the touch of your heat on that chilly cold day took all the dread and worry's away. gave me hope for something new ,what god sends is got to be true i look in your eyes a story of two and wonder just how we became as two ,turning our two into only one that our life went thew the dew . now renewing our life for 2009 . i'm so gald god send me you ........ too mike r. bulter)

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Date: 7/13/2009 7:28:00 PM
good description without being to specific.I have a question fro you?i was looking to see who was online to see if neone knew what (ADULT CALIBER)means.I mean what would it mean to write that type of poetry?
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Date: 1/5/2009 12:17:00 PM
Alisa, The poem expresses your elegant thoughts and feelings succesfully - a novel write. Thanks for reading my poem You Didn't Come and your encouraging comments. Happy New Year. -Mohammad
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Date: 12/28/2008 9:50:00 AM
wonderfully written..flowed very well.
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