Mea Culpa

life’s precious fabric unravelling strand by strand Earth weeps

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/8/2023 9:47:00 AM

Enjoyed your Haiku my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Peter Rees
Date: 2/8/2023 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Bill for your comment on my rather pessimistic little poem about where mankind is heading.

Deb M

Date: 2/1/2023 9:32:00 PM

Hi Peter…l had to look up the meaning of mea culpa “ who's fault was that” So is the fabric a metaphor for life's crisis? Have I got that right Peter? Debx

Deb M
Date: 2/2/2023 1:20:00 AM

Yes it does they are both lovely….perhaps it was just me Peter not understanding l am no academic….l hope you didn't revise because of my comment? Debx

Peter Rees
Date: 2/2/2023 12:46:00 AM

Hi Deb I’ve revised the wording to make my meaning clearer. Does it help ? Peter.