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With eyes a-glaze as other days I took the car, spite drunken haze I say I’m fine, a cab decline Then three blocks down, I miss the sign. The tires squeal, I jerk the wheel Two cars collide and all goes still Then in the chill, a screaming shrill How could this be God’s truthful will? That infant frame, my deepest shame A lifeless form, and me to blame. While in the sky, you catch my eye A foolish dream, but I must try. I in my car, and you afar Oh twinkle, twinkle, little star As limbs go slack, my vision black Please grant my wish to take it back. 04/23/15

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Date: 5/9/2015 8:08:00 PM
Preston, wow, you looked upon the stars to grant you that wish. The drunken haze in this poem sure runs with deep shame. This is a great poem, different from all the rest, however, it is a good one, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:44:00 PM
Preston, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:56:00 PM
I don't know how you keep up with all the contests, but thank you!
Date: 5/9/2015 1:53:00 PM
I enjoyed your creative take on the contest theme. Very nicely written and rhymed! Congrats on a win, Preston!
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Date: 5/9/2015 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Kelly. It was a great contest and I enjoyed the theme. Thank you for hosting it, and for the high ranking. =)
Date: 4/25/2015 7:33:00 AM
A very well written rhyme. Awesome...
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Fatima, I appreciate the compliment.
Date: 4/24/2015 8:11:00 AM
Interesting and well-penned!
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, sir.
Date: 4/24/2015 5:45:00 AM
Oh the power of vivid imagination. Very creative write. A#7.
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words and generous rating, Nandita. =)

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