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Me Myself

Yesterday hover over my today As animal meet the hunter, I meet my Past in future, my Soul swim like a fish in a pool of tears I look up with tearful eyes Like a dying mouse What made my life worse to this Extent?, what made my life worse More than this?....... At first it was mystery to me Like a person groping in the dark, that's me But latter I realized, me Myself, a good looking girl, me Myself stylishness, gorgeous, elegance I overwhelmed with my beauty Hardly am I satisfy with six men a day Yesterday hover over my today As animal meet the hunter, I meet my Past in future, my Soul swim like a fish in a pool of tears I look up with tearful eyes Like a dying mouse What made my life worse to this Extent?, what made my life worse More than this?, me Myself, people warned me but I listen not, I thought I was great I overwhelmed with my beauty Like an arrogant monkey I meet my past in future Like lie meet truth on his posture When I am to work or do something important for my future I thought I am the most perfection, I depend on my beauty, me Myself, I though beauty determine the future I thought it was I alone my beauty lures me To drawn, I left in amidst of lonely war like a solder in the midst of enemy I left amidst of sameness and sorrow, me Myself, I thought it would last forever I thought it would last than ever Oh! What a pity, regret does stay at the back, if There is another chance, if There is chance for another life I will hold it tight Like a jewellery hold it pendant 16/6/2015.

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/9/2015 9:02:00 AM

A great write and powerful piece this is my dear friend, Afolabi. I'm so glad and grateful to read one of your precious gems. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time to read my humble poem and your encouraging comments. More power and blessings ! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/21/2015 9:52:00 AM

Solid 7 on this write! As note , English is not your mother tongue so it needs some editing but the poem is great and the message so clear! BraVO!!!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/23/2015 3:06:00 AM

Thanks a lot for corrected me I have re_do it...A.M.

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/19/2015 11:16:00 AM

Your words speak in an elusive abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. English is obviously not your mother tongue, so it's a little rough in spots, (read it out loud), but your words speak for themselves and tell your story well. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/21/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Email for corrected me, I have correct my mistake and thanks for take your time to comment on my poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2015 12:47:00 PM

- Woow .... unique and really well written, Afolabi ! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ali Adhab

Date: 6/18/2015 9:34:00 AM

Pure expressions and powerful emotions, though I see a glimpse of sorrow within... Still very powerful and magnificent. Regards Ali Adhab

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2015 8:34:00 PM

I found this piece intriguing, ther are many layers to consider.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2015 12:07:00 PM

pure celebration of life.. lovely, afolabi.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/17/2015 9:55:00 AM

well written and oozing pact in depth, thoughts, emotions and power! ~Olive Eloisa =)

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2015 2:36:00 PM

powerful and well expressed

Eve Roper

Date: 6/16/2015 8:11:00 AM

Afolabi, the past always stays in the past the future is what is important. Always, no matter, what see your self worth of your sacrifices through those we learn and move forward. i love the write a 7 Hugs eve

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/16/2015 7:16:00 AM

Skin beauty does not last forever but the beauty of who you are will. I do love that line...soul swim like a fish in a pool of tears.. nicely done. :)

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/16/2015 7:10:00 AM

Lesson Learned, another chance you do have. GOD IS GOOD. Love, Life, Live and Learn.

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/15/2015 11:46:00 PM

Nice write.....Seren