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Me Eat My Words

Let's have some fun hide the sun once and turn the time. Call moon for light day and night same no bright sun there. Who will do it? Little bit tough me eat my words. © kashinath karmakar(6th Auigust 2011) ============================= Placement: 3rd;(August 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Than-Bauk Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/13/2011 4:05:00 PM

Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2011 11:53:00 AM

WAY to go with the contest, Kash. I loved your ideas here.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2011 5:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win...Sara

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2011 3:22:00 AM

hey Kash, congrats on a great win, David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 11:00:00 PM

I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Kashinath. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/11/2011 10:05:00 PM

Kashinath, swell to see your poem take a third place, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/11/2011 7:33:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your terrific third place win with new form and great poetry my friend..luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/11/2011 7:31:00 PM

congrats on your win Kashinath

Tim B

Date: 8/11/2011 7:12:00 PM

Awesomely creative, made me laugh too, very good and congrats on your win Kashinath.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 7:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/11/2011 6:50:00 PM

little bit, but tough enough... way to write, kashinath!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2011 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/9/2011 2:29:00 PM

ey dear kashi... gimme a new one?? come visit... you okay, buddy?? :) hugs, nette

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/9/2011 2:02:00 PM

Clever game with the sun and moon. Yes, I suppose u will be full after eating your words! I must go now to read of your fluttering butterfly! Thanks for the warm welcome, Kash! I will give this poetry form a try. It's a streeeeeetch for me! Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2011 8:41:00 AM

Interesting one for Dr. Ram's contest..Good luck...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Juanita Warden

Date: 8/9/2011 1:53:00 AM

Very witty..I tried and failed..thanks for the comment on mine..jo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2011 11:39:00 PM

so playful and upbeat, kashi... winner for me! come visit..:) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/7/2011 11:18:00 PM

I need to leaarn what all these different types of verses mean. Good luck in the contest Kash, your verse is light and dreamy.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2011 3:20:00 PM

Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/7/2011 1:27:00 PM

An excellent take on the contest. Best wishes

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2011 11:27:00 AM

so cool Kash.. I see there is a form Than Bauk but I did not notice it in the list before..so thankxx luv..and good luck in the contest.. been trying to post mine for a while now.. no access to do so..oh.. when will this all be repaired or put back the way it was .. am so weary of it all.. now I cannot imagine life without the Sun.. since I am a sun worshipper oh..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/7/2011 10:45:00 AM

LOL, witty fun piece

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2011 6:30:00 AM

kashi, a light, dainty piece that bounces with such delightful phrases... winning wishes!! :) come and visit.. huggs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/6/2011 11:03:00 PM

Thanks for the entry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2011 9:16:00 PM

cute one, Kash. Why did you not want to just say I instead of me? Me eat my words. I like the idea you present of hiding the sun. I sure would enjoy turning time. For SURE!