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Me and You

From the moment I was born, You never let me go. As I grew older, You always held my hand. The moments flow by us. Like fish in a river. Every second that passes by. We grow closer. I know there were times of giving up, That you almost had. But you kept trudging through. Through the sun and the rain, The snow and the sleet. My hand was always held. You never let me go. APPRECIATION (In Honour of PD) May 21st, 2013

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Date: 6/3/2013 11:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. AO
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Gwendolyn Coffey
Date: 6/8/2013 10:47:00 PM
Oh my, really? This has made me so happy!! Thank you!!!
Date: 5/21/2013 6:51:00 PM
Nice tribute to a beautiful person.... Jake
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Gwendolyn Coffey
Date: 6/8/2013 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Jake.
Date: 5/21/2013 8:00:00 AM
What a lovely elegy to the person depicted in this poem. Well written and welcome to P/Soup
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Gwendolyn Coffey
Date: 6/8/2013 10:46:00 PM
I wrote this for my Mom. And thank you.
Date: 5/21/2013 5:52:00 AM
Thank you [:
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Date: 5/21/2013 4:51:00 AM
Beautiful poem :)
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Date: 5/21/2013 2:41:00 AM
Thank you. That means a lot.
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Date: 5/21/2013 2:38:00 AM
- A really lovely poem Gwendolyn! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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