Me and You

When
                                                      I'm close
                                                    and my heart
                                                  starts beating so
                            fast that the world around stops for just you.
                                The surroundings are all blurry and far,
                                                    but your smile
                                                     and your lips
                                                        pulls me
                                                          close.
                                                           Each
                                                        new day
                                                         nothing
                                                   but completed
                            dreams and the begining of bright new ones
                           From the sun to the moon my life flows sweet
                                                with warm passion
                                                      and tender
                                                         love for
                                                             you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/31/2012 11:12:00 AM
This is romantic, sweet and beautiful, Michael. How do you do your "duets" with the poets? I rarely have done one with anyone. I take a while to "think" so if you didn't mind waiting on me if we went back and forth on it, that could be a fun thing to do. I'll be out of commission for the weekend but leave me a note if you are ever interested in the duet thing!
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Date: 3/30/2012 7:00:00 PM
Aww thats sweet Michael.. xx Hugs
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Date: 3/30/2012 6:52:00 PM
very beautiful Michael...love,Deb
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