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Me Against Myself

A multitude of subjects clouded the fall, i tryed and i tryed but, couldn`t stand tall, i felt i didn`t have a friend on the earth, the feeling so bad i didn`t feel worth, Anything to anybody that i could see, but seeing it now,that wasn`t to be, my family and friends, were always there, to stand beside me and show they care. I met a girl,whom i later married, rose my spirits,my soul was carried, lifted up and now that cloud... has brightened,my daughter and grandson and now grand daughter,i`m so proud. Paul beadnall..29/6/11.. for contest "Me against myself"

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Date: 7/6/2011 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Me Against Myself" contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:52:00 PM
Very nicely done, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:18:00 PM
congrats on your win with this fine piece cory
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:32:00 PM
My congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Paul
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congrats my friend.... well done and well written...
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:35:00 PM
congrats paul on your fantastic win with this dynamic write ..excellent luv..enjoy..
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:05:00 PM
Fine rhyming poem , quite unforced one. paul. Thanks for asking
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:30:00 PM
this is great nicely done... cory
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Cory Long
Date: 6/28/2011 5:30:00 PM
oh yeah don't forget to change the form!!!
Date: 6/28/2011 2:42:00 PM
this was awesome see soup mail!
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Date: 6/27/2011 9:47:00 AM
It's like a narrative in simple language. I love the first stanza more. Lovely write, Paul.
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:16:00 AM
sweetly romantic paul and a grand tribute of lines to your family luv... beautiful poetry ..impressive write luv..
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