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Me A creature of time Not limited by this space An immortal man

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 9:39:00 PM

A favorite of mine.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 9:38:00 PM

MANA... in your write ;) x

Simone Segal

Date: 2/25/2010 1:06:00 AM

Great write, love Simone

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/23/2010 4:33:00 PM

If you ascribe the the theories of past lives, we all do seem immortal, Edward. Also, in the spiritual afterlife, we are immortalized. But I think you are speaking of a different type of immortality and I find this poem quite compelling. Very nice! Best Wishes, Carolyn

The Fringe

Date: 2/22/2010 9:21:00 PM

I believe that I perceive what you are saying here. Blessings of guidance and wisdom for this journey to you. David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/22/2010 5:10:00 PM

Interesting! light & Love

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/22/2010 2:58:00 PM

I enjoyed this, you aren't limited. awesome(: and my poem -your heart- i didn't mean for the readers to think i was speaking directly to them. i was expressing a heart that belongs to someone that i know. thank you for the kind comment. great poetry here.i love it! -Always&Forever Lynette

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/21/2010 1:28:00 PM

Immortal man,this Haiku is great--Charma:)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/20/2010 10:23:00 PM

I see, Immortal man! I am glad you are not limited by this space. A broad mind is a thing to admire. A well written Haiku, Edward. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your delicious comments on "The Sun bowed down to me". :) I bet you're a great chef. And you had to mention mousse, my favorite chocolate desert. Hmm, I'm hungry now. =) Best wishes, Caroline.