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I found a chateau lawn once, teeming with charm A MAZE it was, growing cluttered yet it had an air Of much lushness TURNING the space into a hued mantle; Where PATHS of herbage, bluebells, camellias sashayed Like a vintage GARDEN set on cobblestone and ivy WALL. Touches of grass here... firs, and jasmines there bloomed Like shabby elegance which was never designed-- On the aisle, a SINUOUS bend led me to a wishing well Creating a playful mood for birdsongs' rhythmic trills, While dragonflies wheeled in pirouetted flight That I, LOST in this finery recalled springtime glee When my cousins' roguish play of hide-and-seek, Mirrored their frolic, TWISTING reeling among weeds: O reminisces gushed of colored florets TRAPPED Within their scratched arms made me dream again, About a youth's lawn which held me enthralled... This wondrous PUZZLE of discovery I now keep, on my mind! ```````````````` Maze--19 Word Challenge Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart 6/28/2020

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Date: 8/13/2020 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette, phenomenal imagery and craftsmanship woven into this brilliant write. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:21:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me, and I love your image too _Constance
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Date: 7/1/2020 2:07:00 PM
I love how your muse is creative, musical, colorful, soothing and enchanting at the same time Nette. An absolute beauty. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/1/2020 12:06:00 AM
I found a chateau lawn once, teeming with charm.. Yes, your chateau lawn poem is teeming with charm.. Beautifully penned.. Great win Nette.. Congrats..
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:10:00 PM
This beauty is sure to garner a top spot. Fantastic, Nette!
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