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I've been tracing the starry sky with little dots, my fingers dancing in diverging paths of knots, I long for a curl leading to a slumber in blues, through these sinuous rivers my thoughts cruise. A garden of warmth, my woolen scarf I nuzzle, my nose itches against the embroidered puzzle, I remember mother's fingers turning with devotion, beautiful threads twisting on the scarf in motion. "How do you identify the threads in that maze?" I would often ask following the needle in daze. "Oh you just need to hold on to a single strand, and knit or loosen it retracing the color band." How will I ever escape my fears if I am lost? I realize this question in my mind hadn't crossed, her answer echoes my hopes trapped in dim rooms, to extinguish agony I need to plunge into fumes. Holding colored love, labyrinths of threads I face, her ethereal touch in my scarf, my fingers trace, through whispering lullabies in stars I sprawl, led to an ocean of light beyond that fearful wall. June 25, 2020 Maze - 10 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance(A Dear Heart) ~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 7/7/2020 10:11:00 AM
So, so beautiful! Congrats on your win!!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Anna! Blessings :)
Date: 7/1/2020 11:26:00 PM
Aditi, I loved your rhymes! Also the mystery of your words weaving a tale from celestial, embroidery, familial, and philosophical influences. Beautiful throughout, you make the 10-word challenge seem easy. Well done! Congrats, keep inspiring, my friend. ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:35:00 PM
I am really honored you love my theme in this poem John. Thank you for your constant source of encouraging words like a true friend. Blessings :)
Date: 7/1/2020 11:04:00 PM
Aditi, you've put in hypnotic state with this beautiful verse. I felt my fingers tracing the dots and the threads. Great flow, rhyme, and theme. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:35:00 PM
Glad you love my words Eve. Thank you for such kind and generous appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/1/2020 3:58:00 PM
What an incredibly, beautiful poem you have penned here -no wonder you ranked at the top of the list of winners! Congratulations, Aditi, your win is well-deserved! Hugs and love, Pandita.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:34:00 PM
I am glad you love my words Pandita :) Thank you for such kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/1/2020 3:19:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me _Constance
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind appreciation and for my placement in your contest. A fave from you means a lot to me Constance. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/1/2020 7:06:00 AM
Such an abundance of creativity in every write, my friend. Your gifted words always shine--Kudos for the TOP honors and all the accolades you receive. You are a brilliant star--one of a kind, Aditi! BIG congrats!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/1/2020 7:56:00 AM
Glad you love my words my friend. It is really an honor to receive such generous appreciation from you. Thank you for all your kind words and wishes. God bless you :)
Date: 6/30/2020 11:58:00 PM
Beautifully composed.. A totally different approach to the theme, which mesmerize the reader's heart.. Great win Aditi.. Congrats..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/1/2020 12:02:00 AM
Glad you love my words Jenish. Thank you for your uplifting words of appreciation. God bless you :)
Date: 6/27/2020 12:11:00 PM
Constructive write ,you've woven the maze so beautifully mam.Loved your work like always. Good luck for the contest.Keep writing and Keep inspiring :-) Take care.Much Love.~Deepa
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Date: 6/28/2020 9:32:00 AM
I am glad you love my words Deepa! Thank you for such kind words of appreciation. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/27/2020 3:14:00 AM
Dear Heart will be very pleased to read this awesome verse...another winner dear friend...your pen spews gold...^WW^ :o)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 9:31:00 AM
I am so glad you love my words WW! Always honored to be appreciated by you my friend. Blessings :)
Date: 6/25/2020 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed it and send my love and prayers for God's blessings on you dear friend, Gina
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Date: 6/25/2020 12:41:00 PM
Glad you love my words Gina. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. Lots of love and blessings :)
Date: 6/25/2020 6:03:00 AM
Excellent rhyming......greatly expressed-- Holding colored love, labyrinths of threads I face,/ her ethereal touch in my scarf, my fingers trace, /// enjoyable reading
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/25/2020 12:40:00 PM
Glad you love my words Mahtab. Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation :) God bless you
Date: 6/25/2020 4:21:00 AM
Brilliantly composed Aditi, you've woven the ten words into your verse with ease. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/25/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Tom. God bless you :)

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