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Mayon Volcano

While kiss by the clouds Perfect cone remains sober Fury hides beneath The subject is one of the active volcanoes in my homeland, Philippines. Proud to be one of the nominees in the race for 7 Wonders of Nature :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/19/2008 10:22:00 PM
I want to see this volcano more and more each year. Now I want to see it more than ever because of this haiku hehehe. Nice. - Olongapoet
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Date: 9/10/2008 4:22:00 PM
small write, very descriptive piece, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/8/2008 6:05:00 AM
yes, that's our Mayon Volcano and you've perfectly captured its beautiful image in just three lines, bravo! keep on sharing... rgds, Ernesto
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Date: 9/7/2008 12:19:00 PM
Much said in just three lines. Nice use of personification. Good job! Karen
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Date: 9/6/2008 8:42:00 PM
This is an excellent description. I can see the imagery clearly. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/6/2008 7:27:00 AM
Perfect descriptive Haiku in 5~7~5 format , Terisita .....
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Date: 9/6/2008 6:06:00 AM
if you live in the shadow of a volcano? MOVE jhl
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