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Mayfly

MAYFLY I’m shadow’s child, grown on the lake, by women on their own. The reedy cattails, and brown mud pots, occupy my time. I’m taller now, and skinny too, like some noxious weed. And in a minute, with one frail breath, I’m a woman too. I’m golden new, in nodes of light, my love is truly found! Our baby girl, is born to us, then left for her own love. I’ve slipped between the sun and moon, I’ve suddenly grown old. Getting small, moving slow, like some darling sloth. “But I just got here,” I yell, to an empty brightened room. “I want... a Do Over!” Who hears but the lamps, as they blink back in shock, and the light on the wall, is their last for the day. The laugh from a Mayfly, is cruel for the count, by shadow, by weed, by wrinkled old sloth. Last flicker, last moonlight, last tick of the clock. Deep breath, deep dream, the stardust blew out. By Edlynn Nau Written: May 5, 2017 ©April, 2019

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Date: 4/13/2019 3:09:00 PM
Time, that bandit that robs us of our youth, our dreams and even our heart if we let it my great friend. I am within a gasp and a sad moan of reaching that last echoing flicker. Yet I see each day, moth , tear as a blessing. Your deep, wondrous and finely crafted verses sing to an old poet's heart my friend. A fav and a true gem..
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/13/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Robert. If only we could get that Do Over! I wouldn’t do many things different but I sure would correct a few events and choices! Then, when you think about it... how do we know that correcting any mistakes would not change and interfere with other’s lives such that we’d need Do Overs, endlessly? Reminds me of that excellent movie “Run Lola Run”! Yet the idea of having more lives like a computer game seems ideal at the other end of our journey. Goes by in warp speed. Thank you for your valuable input and your support.
Date: 4/8/2019 5:00:00 PM
Wow...this is so striking and expressive, Edlynn! Love its originality. ~ Had not realized you're posting again...pleased to see you around again. Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/9/2019 11:21:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to see you and to know that your absence has been mainly due to other priorities. I take a short break sometimes, but Soup keeps reining me back :) Take care. Warm regards // paul
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/8/2019 5:12:00 PM
Ha ha! Thank you Paul. I stick one on now and then but am busy with caring for my dad. So, I didnt pay for membership and I dont get to read much here. It seems terrible to have some of you read mine when I don’t get time (at this point) to read yours. I sure miss it! I do still post after my cousin lost his house to fire last summer. He laments that all his writing is gone. At least our work is a bit safer here. I hope to get back to you in a year or two. In the meantime, thank you so much for reading anything by me. It has lifted my spirits! I have posted some. You are so thoughtful (AS ALWAYS) and I miss that connection.
Date: 4/8/2019 5:33:00 AM
Edlynn, your poem resonates with me at this point in my life. If I had a do over I would work less and enjoy my children more. Life slips by so quickly. You convey this brilliantly in this wonderful poem! xxoo : )
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/8/2019 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I have a young student that just found out she had cancer at 42. Life is fleeting and quick and who we are passes like these verses. We are older so suddenly and we see how short the ride is. Mayflies all. I just wanted us to pay attention.

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