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Maybe Later

All those things you promised we’d go through since our relationship started and maybe till where it ends but it’s always a “maybe” and “later” from you. It’s a shame all our fantasies died as time flew. Sweet kisses, happy tears, our love lasts forever and all those things you promised we’d go through. I’ve been following yours, thus killing my point of view. Thousand times I asked and hoped for a reply’s amend but it’s always a “maybe” and “later” from you. Time drew on my heart, a messy disfigured tattoo I waited just too much, too long to merely comprehend all those things you promised we’d go through. You gave yourself in fully and told all that was true. My intentions and plans weren’t denied and fended but it’s always a “later” and “maybe” from you. I’m tired of all these hesitations, they’re giving me blues. My patience has limits, I wish I can suspend All those things you promised we’d go through but it’s always a “maybe” and “later” from you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/12/2012 2:46:00 PM
This is a very good Villanelle. Bravo. This is a style very foreign to me. i don't think I could write one. Great work.
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