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Maybe It's Wrong

Nothing is wrong when I am young and you are beautiful I can't wait too long to listen to your song when nature is wonderful. No, maybe it's wrong when we're unknown and not committed I wouldn't sing for you Now I need to know you and we should be committed. Okay then alright Give it up tonight, Nothing has happened yet. Yeah, you were wrong let it go and wait a long for a true sky light.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 4:15:00 PM

I feel you value the concept of getting to know each other first and not rushing things thus possibly ruining a lifelong possibility of bliss as I read this.

Imran Islam
Date: 7/10/2020 5:18:00 PM

Dear Poet, Thanks a lot for your kinds words. Stay safe , Stay close!

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/9/2020 6:56:00 AM

Nice, eighteen lines capturing the conflicts of desire and duty in young love. Stay safe

Imran Islam
Date: 7/9/2020 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. God bless

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/9/2020 5:48:00 AM

A very thought provoked write Lure - may all go well for you. Blessings my friend. Jennifer.

Imran Islam
Date: 7/9/2020 9:14:00 AM

Dear Jennifer, Thank you so much for your inspirational comments. I am young and you all are my inspiration. Stay safe, stay close!

Elaine George

Date: 7/8/2020 6:14:00 PM

Much to ponder her, dear Lure. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine

Imran Islam
Date: 7/8/2020 8:10:00 PM

Dear Elaine, Thanks for your comments. Stay safe!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/8/2020 12:22:00 PM

We have to move cautiously, too quick and we might ruin the moment. Always be patient, it pays off in the end. Tom

Imran Islam
Date: 7/8/2020 12:44:00 PM

Dear Tom, thank you so much for your deep and powerful comments. I got it. Stay safe!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/8/2020 11:50:00 AM

Hello Lure Pot, enjoyed the poem. You know it takes time to know each other.Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2020 7:49:00 AM

This is a lovely poem Lure, I followed your suggestion and made my breakfast With the bread and honeyand egg. I enjoyed it Thank you. I will have it more often now. Enjoy your day my friend.

Imran Islam
Date: 7/8/2020 11:53:00 AM

Yes, thank you so much for your lovely comments my friend. Stay safe!