Maybe

I smile - I smile every time But, I smile once she's past I wonder why she's never smiled back. We talk - we talk every time But, we talk when she's past I wonder why she's never answered back. Maybe she does smile, Maybe she does answer back, But, maybe she only does it when she's past.

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Llayn Mays

Date: 3/11/2016 11:50:00 PM

I've felt that. Very touching

Jerry Bolton

Date: 3/11/2016 3:14:00 PM

And here I thouht I was the only one that happened to. Enjoyed this convoluted expression of your poem. But yes indeed, I have been bypassed by the most georgous chicks (women for the ones who might be offended by chicks). Never could understand, but I'm beginning to think that maybe they could take just one look at me and understand I was the sort of guy who would call them chicks. Eh . . . Sory for getting carried away with my thoughts . . . eally loved your poem, Jovial.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2016 4:19:00 AM

- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Jovial - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2016 8:45:00 PM

Jovial, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2016 12:09:00 PM

Jovial, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 2/15/2016 4:09:00 PM

I enjoyed very much this poem Jovial. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Jovial Vigilante
Date: 2/17/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thank you, Nayda.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 8:21:00 AM

Jovial,, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jovial Vigilante
Date: 2/15/2016 8:43:00 AM

Hello Linda, Thank you for the welcome and thank you for the friendship. Jovial.