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I held my small beautiful thing in my hand Precious pure perfection Oh how it brought me joy You asked me “May I see what you are holding?” I responded “Of course my dear friend.” You blissfully beheld its shimmering shine. For a moment you were speechless. I felt you understood. I wrapped my small beautiful thing Placed it carefully away Sharing it with you made me feel special Every day you asked me about it I had hoped you would forget about it You said “Such beauty should be shared with the world!” I did fancy fame and fortune. I remembered how special I felt when I shared it with you. My small beautiful thing grew Somehow it changed It was not itself anymore As my ego expanded My inner self shrank becoming small Everything I had went to protecting my large beautiful thing I could no longer hold it in my hand Then one day, or should I say in the night A stealthy stranger stole it He hid it far away It became small again It prefers it that way I cried and felt relief at the same time. Without it I found my privacy I felt myself graciously grow. As days passed I thought “Maybe it was never really my small beautiful thing.” In the end that’s okay. Photo from ShutterStock.

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Date: 10/12/2023 8:00:00 PM
Growth, from crises it sprouts. Good to see this maniacal ego rout! ~ gw
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/12/2023 9:42:00 PM
Thanks for your visit Gershon.
Date: 10/10/2023 5:03:00 PM
A FAV, my friend. The ego is such a tantalizing thing to acknowledge. Each time it is acknowledged it grows ... It's the opposite of, "use it are lose it"; in reality, it's abuse it and you lose it! It can completely destroy a person and their value to mankind. It almost did in my life. Obviously, this one really resonates with me. Thanks for sharing, what can be, a life changing message with us readers. Have a great day! Bill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/11/2023 6:54:00 AM
Much appreciated. My wife is Asian and in her culture humility is an important value. Myself being an introvert by nature, that resonates with me. Thanks for sharing your thoughts Bill.
Date: 10/10/2023 10:13:00 AM
I admire the lesson that your poem provides. Well done, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2023 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Sotto. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 10/9/2023 5:55:00 PM
This was a mystery to try to figure out what that small beautiful thing was. I thought it was a ring, but as I read on, it seems it had to be something else. Then I read other's comments and re-read the poem. Creative work here.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2023 6:36:00 AM
Thanks for giving my poem consideration,
Date: 10/9/2023 2:49:00 PM
incredible, metaphorically tale about keeping one's ego in check. Oh, how I once misused my talents and gifts, allowing my ego to take hold. Love the life lesson here. Well done, Richard. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2023 5:17:00 PM
Thanks for giving it a read. :0)
Date: 10/8/2023 4:52:00 PM
What a fantastic moral lesson to be learned here in your creative and poetic metaphors, Richard. Thank you for sharing this important message with others. God bless! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/8/2023 10:51:00 PM
Blessings to you as well. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 10/8/2023 9:47:00 AM
Awesome poetic treatise on keeping our ego in check, regardless of the proficiency of our gift or talent. At least that's what I get from it. There is no photo attachment though. Did you delete it?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/8/2023 10:51:00 PM
You are spot on my friend.

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