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May Surprise

Who remembers, is it only me? Flour paste, scissors and pretty colored paper Assembled upon the table, the early morn in May This memory shrugs so many years away Our innocence, cut and shaped Into bright-sprigged paper cones Such sweet accomplishments, each our own Then quickly running out the door To pick spring beauties, violets galore Or lady slippers, wildwood fern, we gathered them Sweet Williams, heavy on their stems And fresh as morning dew, filled with bloom The paper cones were flower filled And paper handles dried, smells of sweet perfume Then down the dusty road we trudged Arms loaded side by side No greater pleasure as a child The thought of bringing someone smiles Then knocking on each neighbor's door And calling "May basket...Surprise!" Our little legs then running quickly, down the road, Behind a tree, we would hide And watch them find this flower prize Must not....get caught.....must not get caught! And we were taught That bringing light to someone's eyes Was worth a lot !! Under May Day's vibrant skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/28/2009 3:18:00 PM
OMG I thought I was the only one who lamented th loss of this wonderful May ritual! Wonderful Memories Carrie! Thank you! And thank you for your comments on my tribute poem also! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/27/2009 7:33:00 PM
I had forgot, that is what is so unique about this site, it's a place to come and revive old memories. I could almost picture you breaking and running. made a smile, thanks! God Bless. Ron
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:19:00 AM
Carrie, I am ever spellbound by your way with words, you romance the soul out of them, and let morph like light. Powerful.
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Date: 4/27/2009 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful nostalgia Carrie another for your anthology of this genre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 4/27/2009 3:45:00 AM
Hmmm I just can't bring this one up. I remember talking about May Day and May Pole so maybe I did and can't remember it. I can just see your smiles though...can I get extra credit for that
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Date: 4/27/2009 2:06:00 AM
wonderful write. brighten my day, you did
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Date: 4/26/2009 9:03:00 PM
This is a very sweet childhood memory, to make something grand out of construction paper, scissors, and glue, was so much fun in school. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:14:00 PM
I remember..once my brother and I picked flowers from our neighbors garden and put them in her basket. Shame on us! BG
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Date: 4/26/2009 6:11:00 PM
this is fun! fun! fun! Carrie!what a delightful 'frame-of-mind to write such sweet beauty! Jim
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Date: 4/26/2009 5:52:00 PM
That's a sweet deed, poem indeed. I'm sure there were a lot of happy people in your neighbor hood. Thank you for the images that your poem brought to mind. I can almost hear the children runnig off giggling and soft-squeeling with delight after they left their May surprise. And, thank you for your comments on my poetry. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:56:00 PM
Love this my Carrie...as usaual you bring me into your poem and let me enjoy your love for the words that flow so well. You are a gift my friend..thanks for always taking the time to read my work...i look forward to it.
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:43:00 PM
You are not the only one "Who remembers" making the baskets and filling them with flowers. Lovely images of tender, young hearts at play, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
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