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May Love Rip

I passed away last night. This morning I buried my soul. Love died inside of me My story left untold. The funeral was attended by Hurt, Anger and Pain While Solitude and Despair Slowly comforted me in the rain. The mundane atmosphere, Coincided with the mood. I was dressed in a black outfit With my head covered in a hood. Black birds circled above As the box lowered into the ground Then descended on surrounding dead trees. Mourning cries the only sound. A heart shattered in pieces Was scattered into the dismal dark sea And drifted many miles away, For the entire world to see. Hope, Faith and Never Give Up, Engraved on every piece. A heart that held strong for many years. Ends off as a ravenous feast. Tears have finally run dry. Emotions are stone cold. Love died of natural causes, Yet could have been consoled. I passed away last night. This morning I buried my soul. A heart once full of love, Leaves in its place a Black Hole…

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Date: 2/16/2019 12:38:00 PM
A wonderful piece
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Date: 2/2/2014 2:07:00 PM
i love it!!! don't stop writing you ...Ami,
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 2/3/2014 12:51:00 AM
Ahh Many Thanks Dom :)
Date: 4/7/2013 9:23:00 AM
really interesting write, very well constructed and written. Have a blessed day
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 4/8/2013 12:30:00 AM
Many Thanks Gordon :)
Date: 4/6/2013 9:55:00 PM
Sasha, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 4/8/2013 12:29:00 AM
Thank You Linda :) *hugs* Have an amazing week ahead :)

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