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May I Write You

May I write a poem for you, to gently touch your soul? May I caress your blackened world, make diamonds with your coal? Will you read a page to turn, will you let your heart control? Touch your sensitive senses, read poems that console. Will my poem save you, from being lost, as your shadowed world surrounds? You've been hurt by trusting tenderness, as your faith has broken down. Will this poem reach your fragile heart? Find hidden tears you cry. Will it change pain's shackled bond, to hope, with wings that fly? Open Poetry Contest 7/11/15

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Date: 7/25/2015 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations Frederic on this lovely romantic poem being high on the winner's list! I just adored it! 7
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:01:00 AM
Exquisitely expressive and emotive is this write Frederic! Congrats on super win!
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:12:00 PM
You write sweet romantic lines, Frederic. Congrats! Kim
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:23:00 AM
Frederic. the way you placed some queries, you create some magic in it...!!! Like it!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:13:00 AM
Yes, Frederic, you can write many a poem, as long as they touch the heart, like this one! Congratulations on a deserved win! // paul
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Date: 7/19/2015 6:11:00 PM
wonderful win
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Date: 7/19/2015 4:37:00 PM
yes, you may lol this makes me want to go 'ahhh'; though you are the sonnet master you are also a master of romance, as this proves! congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/19/2015 4:41:00 PM
Thank you for the kindness Charlotte
Date: 7/12/2015 12:29:00 AM
very lovely thoughts, Frederick! (and I do not really like snow.I just like sleep haha)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/12/2015 9:01:00 AM
snow is pretty to look at but hard to live with..hmmm may be a metaphor there..
Date: 7/11/2015 12:22:00 PM
I love the softness and tenderness of this write Frederic. You will have many saying yes.
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Date: 7/11/2015 12:11:00 PM
oh this is absolutely beautiful Frederic such a tender write:-) hugs jan xx7
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