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May Bride of Spring

MAY BRIDE OF SPRING May bride of Spring sheds shades of night And dons a dress of Emerald green Now winter’s chills are put to flight May bride of Spring sheds shades of night While humble Hawthorne blossoms bright Like snow upon the hedge now seen May bride of Spring sheds shades of night And dons a dress of Emerald green

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 6/12/2019 1:32:00 PM

Loved the bride of spring! Sweet poem! -Smita

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2019 7:44:00 PM

Hello Geoffrey Brewer, I think the bride looks good in emerald green. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2019 5:51:00 PM

That is okay my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2019 6:25:00 PM

Hello Geoffrey Brewer, my husband was french,I am Polish Ukrainian.My husband was french yet spoke English and French. I was born in Canada. have a nice evening my friend.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/2/2019 8:52:00 PM

Sorry for the French. Couldn’t resist it

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/2/2019 8:35:00 PM

Bonjour Mmle de Beaulieu. Merci Beaucoup

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/24/2019 3:10:00 PM

Dear Geoffrey:Such a beautiful song of Spring. The form fits the theme to perfection. Into my Favs. today. SuZ

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/26/2019 9:33:00 AM

Many thanks for your kind words. Suzanne

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/21/2019 11:29:00 PM

This is lovely! I have just read these two poems back to back and while this is a gorgeous triolet, you had to sacrifice some of your beautiful lines and bit of story from the original.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/22/2019 1:50:00 AM

Many thanks P.S. I think that both forms have their points - the inadvertent one I hit on has the potential of a nice rhyme and rhythm pattern. I may try it again under another name

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2019 4:43:00 AM

This is gorgeous Geoffrey! Sorry you didn't get to enter it. I struggled with mine for a long time. I had never written a Triolet before. They are a challenge for me. Lovely! : )

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/22/2019 1:46:00 AM

Our first attempts at this attractive form! I think we may try again. Thanks for your kind comments, Connie.