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Material Love

Love for a person & love for a being Is now nothing compared to love for things A pair of shoes for a boy I'll sacrifice love for a toy This materialistic world in which we live Is turning out to be a well-disguised thief Robbing us of happiness we once found in simplicity And replacing it with insatiable needs that are rife with complexities No more 'I love yous' in exchange for 'Do you love me?' Now its I love you because you can give me something shiny, new & fancy Many friends walking down the aisle It's a happy day; they're the glowing bride! But nobody can see the tear within The one that signifies a fragmented win The tear that holds the true love sacrificed In order to live a life that is relatively nice Having it all was what we searched for in a character But now owning it all seems to be the better They say life is a wheel that keeps revolving I pray for the day the priority arrow turns back to the love of beings Over the love of things.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/4/2020 5:53:00 AM
Isaa ! This is one powerful poem !?? it happens today & people are being choosy & materialistic ? some even compromise their love just for riches ! Beautiful piece bro !! Glad to see a Fijian like me in this page?
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:05:00 AM
Really smart words, there really is too much obsession over things, when we should be paying attention to beings around us. Nicely said. Grats on being featured on the home page. :)
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Kai Viti
Date: 9/28/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thanks ??
Date: 9/2/2015 11:54:00 PM
That is Xool, we got to Kai's back to back, :)WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Kai Viti
Date: 9/28/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 9/1/2015 11:22:00 PM
Kai, this is the world I love ... Awesome poem... Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Kai Viti
Date: 9/28/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks SKAT!

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