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Mated

If only It were easy for me to part from thee to go back to a time afore I knew you ere your beauty and your love were forever in my heart branded times together in my mind forever treasured, the beauty of you in my soul forever mated Leaving nothing of all your immediate reminders. A caress of flames to engulf me And warm my cold loneliness, A moment of bliss to bid me farewell Without ire or regret Though I cannot claim from thee my heart anymore than I can claim the moon from the skies for your love. The heart wants what it wants and I cannot even begin to grasp the reasons neither can I fathom the depths of these alien feelings, Only that should I lose you after I've just found you, I ....cannot imagine going on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/5/2012 2:11:00 PM
Brilliantly penned my dear friend. I guess we've all been struck by the cupid's arrow. We've all searched for the caress and embrace of unconditional love. It all seems strangely over-rated to me. Love is the oracle of lies if you ask me. Nicely done. I'm glad I read your poem. I'll make it a point to subscribe to your poems. Taha
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Date: 1/3/2012 10:21:00 PM
Sounds like you are lovestruck, sean. And what a romantic poet you are!
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Sean Claudine
Date: 1/4/2012 12:20:00 AM
lovestruck, ayeh it's a pain!! at the expense of WHAT? unconditionally loving?, DAMN THESE EMOTIONS. thank you dear
Date: 1/3/2012 3:40:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 1/4/2012 12:24:00 AM
thank you, Sara.

Book: Shattered Sighs