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Below is the poem entitled MATED which was written by poet SEAN CLAUDINE. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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If only It were easy for me to part from thee

to go back to a time afore I knew you

ere your beauty and your love were forever in my heart branded

times together in my mind forever treasured, the beauty of you in my soul forever mated

Leaving nothing of all your immediate reminders.

A caress of flames to engulf me

And warm my cold loneliness,

A moment of bliss to bid me farewell

Without ire or regret

Though I cannot claim from thee my heart anymore than I can claim the moon from the skies for your love.

The heart wants what it wants and I cannot even begin to grasp the reasons neither can I fathom the depths of these alien feelings,

Only that should I lose you after I've just found you, I ....cannot imagine going on.

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  1. Date: 1/5/2012 2:11:00 PM
    Brilliantly penned my dear friend. I guess we've all been struck by the cupid's arrow. We've all searched for the caress and embrace of unconditional love. It all seems strangely over-rated to me. Love is the oracle of lies if you ask me. Nicely done. I'm glad I read your poem. I'll make it a point to subscribe to your poems. Taha

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 10:21:00 PM
    Sounds like you are lovestruck, sean. And what a romantic poet you are!

    Date: 1/4/2012 12:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lovestruck, ayeh it's a pain!! at the expense of WHAT? unconditionally loving?, DAMN THESE EMOTIONS. thank you dear
  1. Date: 1/3/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Very emotive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

    Date: 1/4/2012 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, Sara.