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What a game ... he was just a jester, and this a ghastly prospect ... The ground lay torn open before him, a wound in the earth that called to his dark heart, pulled on his better judgement like lead ... warm, that shadowy keep ... warm and peaceful, if but a plunge away ... He turned back around to the game board, it's alternate squares dancing ... monochromatic patchwork of fealty and fate, with just seven solid forms left atop it ... only two were his, King and Pawn ... Hopeless barter for the formidable Whites - King, Knight, Rook, Pawn, and yes, the opposing Queen - he was bound on all sides, with but one last rattling gasp due ... unless ... he looked back at the crevasse ... The torn black gape smiling at him ... whispering, tender: "All is lost, give yourself to the grim dispassion, soft and irenic, that which waits ... rest ... yes, tranquil rest ... and deep, deep abiding sleep" ... Death waited on both sides like cold bookends ... though the gash in the ground offered serene and painless silence, (and the expunging of all his misdeeds), not so, the black-winged specter he faced in strategy ... That end would be assuredly excruciating. He looked once more to the black, fathomless abyss ... reaching back with one leg, (as if to dip his toes in a puddle, dark), he drew up to the board and made his penultimate move ... The sacrifice had worked, you see ... and in his rush to take the Black Majesty, Death had been hastily negligent, committing one very careless act ... the jester moved his pawn to crown it ... the final move was not required - "sauce for the goose" ... Death trembled in rage, put his head back and screamed at the sky, (as if heaven cared a wit for his haughty displeasure) ... he looked at the jester briefly, a snarl curling his lip, and wagged his index finger ... transforming it to a feather as he did ... The rest of his body followed suit, as he slowly came to his full, hideous form - a raven, so black that it devoured the light around it, and brought a frost to the air and ground nearby ... the jester shivered in his spine, watching ... Like a scraggly old man, the now immense bird shuffled and scraped its crooked talons to the chess board, knocked over its remaining pieces in defeat ... and flew into the yawning fissure, swallowed by the coal black earth that closed in behind it ... Breathing a sigh of relief ... the jester watched, transfixed, as there, in the dark soil and ash that had filled the ragged hole, up popped a tiny green sprout ... of new life. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Clown At The Abyss" Poetry Contest, Kai Michael Neumann, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Oh What The Hell - Just Toss One In" Poetry Contest, John Lawless, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/24/2020 6:31:00 PM
Let's hear it for the power of the slow and steady, forgotten pawn! Such a creative response to the prompt, Bard. Enjoyed your powerful imagination poured into a fateful chess match between jester and death. Congrats on the podium win ~ John
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Date: 3/24/2020 5:41:00 PM
Wow, Greg, this built up to a dramatic high and left one with hope. Congratulations, friend!
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Date: 3/24/2020 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your marvellous win.
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Date: 3/24/2020 1:10:00 PM
- Back with a new congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2020 10:07:00 AM
Lots of vivid details and suspense. I enjoyed that surprise of hope at the end. Well done!
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Date: 9/5/2018 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on your chilling write, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/19/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Kim! :-) <3
Date: 9/2/2018 3:20:00 PM
This is giving me the chills up the spine, just as intended by a fine writer ! Well done, Gregory!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/4/2018 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Carrie ... as you know, you are one of my favs here at the Soup, and any comment from you is like gold in my pocket! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 9/1/2018 2:11:00 PM
Gregory....I never played chess and now I know why. Poe is probably asking around about "who's this new guy muscling in on my territory?" Great job and thanks for participating in the contest
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/4/2018 12:12:00 AM
You are much too kind, John, (and I SO enjoy it!) ... this was a lot of fun, and I enjoyed very much getting into that "Poe" frame of mind. I am honored you found it worthy, my friend. Blessings and thanks to you! :-)
Date: 4/11/2018 9:27:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win, Gregory. Awesome poetry.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/29/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line - appreciated, friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/2/2018 8:05:00 PM
So many great lines, masterly penned, Gregory. I love your descriptive line for black: "A raven, so black that it devoured the light around it." Congrats! :) ~ Artsie
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:22:00 PM
That's so sweet of you to say, Artsie, and I greatly appreciate the kindness - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/1/2018 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A graphic and creative interpretation from the pic. I enjoyed.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:22:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Susan, I'm glad you liked it my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/1/2018 11:14:00 AM
Superb, vivid use of figurative language in this WINNING poem, Greg! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thanks to you, my friend - I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Janice! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/1/2018 10:19:00 AM
Wow! Checkmate, congratulations Gregory... Miick
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:20:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Mick! :-)
Date: 4/1/2018 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Gregory! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! :-) <3
Date: 4/1/2018 8:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your TOP winning poem, Gregory :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:20:00 PM
Very kind of you, Anne-Lise - thank you so very much, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/1/2018 7:56:00 AM
This image was just begging for a chess game and you delivered in fine style Greg..With life and death hanging in the balance...Glad life prevailed!..Great write and win...Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Joseph, that's very kind of you, and I am so honored and humbled to be on a list with such great writers ... I greatly appreciate the placement! Blessings, Friend! :-)
Date: 4/1/2018 7:49:00 AM
Back with congratulations, a top win! Splendid :) muchos hugs dear friend xxxmo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:16:00 PM
That's so sweet of you, Mo - thanks so much! :-) <3
Date: 3/28/2018 12:02:00 PM
The battle of good over evil, life over death in wonderful verse, Greg. I've never liked the symbolism of ravens. They're eerie but will prove to be of use someday soon.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 4:12:00 AM
Yes, you're right, Lin, (about Ravens), and thank you SO much for the kind words - blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/28/2018 10:26:00 AM
Wow ! What a great poem for the contest. Excellent. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 4:13:00 AM
Very kind of you, Heidi - thank you! :-) <3
Date: 3/28/2018 9:58:00 AM
So many titillating lines! Clever eloquent execution, you brought the game to life with the richness of epic lore. A winner in my books. "Death waited on both sides, like cold book ends"...delicious poetry! My best to you in the contest my dear! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 4:14:00 AM
That's very sweet, Mo, I'm glad you liked this one ... this was a lot of fun! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3

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