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~masochist Mind~

Expunged upon each breath, freezing accusations sealed your lips, and like a snare, retribution closed its choking grip. I had seen the flush of blush upon each cheek, when casual touch lingered just a little too much, for what is flirtation but prelude to conquest, with me a discarded after-thought. Excuses like autumn leaves, twisted in my maelstrom, they were nothing but a future medium for growing better lies, and I gather shining images, spliced together with fantasy, projecting this movie onto the blankness of my fears. Coincidence brings coffee to a table, over-sweetened with honey words and schoolgirl-like smiles, this innocent rendezvous that taints my blue sky, is nothing but a grey cloud of twisted imagination, and self-flagellation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 3:10:00 AM
Colin, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:08:00 PM
nicley penned, very vivid write, congrats on the featured work
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:31:00 AM
PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:05:00 PM
Interesting poem for the reader to delve into. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:46:00 PM
Colin, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Colin. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:40:00 AM
Dear Colin,Congatulations on this well derserved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Colin. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:33:00 AM
You do have a way with words and metophor, this keeps your interest all the way through. Takes me back to High School and the games people play, well said, just the inner thoughts when dating, mostly the boys but not so much anymore. Thanks for sharing. Judy Ril;ey
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Date: 1/5/2009 8:59:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Colin. I look forward to reading more of your excellent poetry. Love, Carol
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