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Masks

Masks are worn in silence Mindful of other's eyes Moving slow through shadows Memories of their lies Motion comes in quiet Mirror reflects deep in you Mortals always pursue 4/29/14

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Date: 5/6/2014 11:43:00 AM
Frederic, how true, shh!!! love this.., Congrats on your poem :) Linda
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Date: 5/1/2014 8:44:00 PM
Masks are a fascinating subject. A fav short story of mine has a masked planet! I detective goes to find a crook hiding there. The crook catches him beats him in public and rips off the detectives mask and tells the crowd - I'm a detective & this man is a murderer! The crowd [knowing only a perverse man would rip another's mask off] turns on the crook & kills him! [thus saving the detectives life!Congrad's Light & Love
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/2/2014 5:16:00 PM
sounds like a very interesting story, it would make a good twilight zone
Date: 5/1/2014 5:04:00 AM
a sense of mystery lies within your lines, frederick, with a surprise in the end.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/1/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Nette, its contests like yours that take me out of my comfort zone, learning to try different forms
Date: 4/30/2014 10:25:00 PM
An awesome write Frederic ! congrats on great win !
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/1/2014 8:59:00 AM
Thank you Dr Upma for reading my poetry and for your kind response
Date: 4/29/2014 5:26:00 PM
Outstanding masquerade Frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/1/2014 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Tim, it's interesting to try these different forms

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