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Masks (Of Hallowen)

Darkness uttermost Howl gobblins, gooks, grinch and ghost Dripping touch of night Blood like curdled light Candle tears, white serpents hiss Shadowing the mist Hell has broken free Behind the masked jubilee Of death's silent screams Rats, pumpkins, dead dreams In dried fairytales of leaves Mark, our prank deceives The shuddering knife Not again, jack ripped his heart With pale piper's fife. Not heaven nor art The cold merriment, a wheeze Of dark wintry breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2015 7:15:00 PM
i like the dark imagery here.... SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2010 6:45:00 PM
these scarey writes employ a touch of genius, here my friend! Great job
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Date: 11/17/2010 3:25:00 PM
Wow, David! You're way over my head. on the Three MUsicians. Your poem is also over my head in places, but what I can figure out is super. We need a little music to these Haiku - Maybe the Witches Sabbath from Berlioz's Fantastic Symmphony. Regards, Dave
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:40:00 PM
Good work that is very descriptive of Halloween..Good luck if entered in a contest...Sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:25:00 PM
Last but one triplet is a masterstroke elluding to Jack the ripper and piper the pied piper of Hamlin, david
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:18:00 AM
Dark images that are so appropriate for Halloween, David. Many great lines; I especially liked "jack ripped his heart." Nic play on words that recalls Jack the Ripper's killing spree. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:49:00 AM
"Not heaven nor art"..How right you are, David. Perfect imagery, always.. goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
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