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Mask of Snowy White

I came home one evening after a hard day at work, To find a surprise waiting for me. I ran to the table, my heart filled of glee. I imagined him sneaking in with a sexy little smirk. It was a wooden box, beside it a mask of snowy white I opened it up and found a note. Written on it was a cute quote: “We will dance until the clock strikes midnight” I followed the rose pedals sprinkled on the floor, They led me to my bedroom. My heart went boom, boom, boom, As I opened the door. I could not believe what I found, For it was the most beautiful thing I have ever seen. An elegant white with a beads of green. On my bed was a gorgeous gown. There was another letter, This one written out in pedals all across the bed. The message read: “There is a hole in my heart, and seeing you tonight will make it all better” I put on the dress and looked in the mirror. And I found another remark. “Get all dressed up and come to the old park, Our moment together draws nearer and nearer.” I rushed down the stairs, Grabbed the mask on the way out. Ran down the street, my mind clear of all doubt, For this man was the answer to my prayers. I got to the park and saw him waiting, And I discovered I was not the only one to wear a mask. He told me that I had one more task. He said “Close your eyes and think back to when we started dating” Obeying him, I closed my eyes, And without me knowing, he got down on one knee. Everything fell silent, then I heard “Desiree will you marry me?” That’s when my heart burst into a million fireflies. I opened my eyes, stuck in a trance As I was not expecting this thrill. I flung my arms around him and replied “Oh Stephen of course I will!” Just then he grabbed me and we began to dance. Just like his note said, We danced until the clock struck midnight, Holding me close with all his might, Right on his shoulder is where I placed my head. The rain began to pour, So we ran hand in hand. He said “This is not how I planned” Then we reached my door. We entered my house, Where it was all cozy and dry. Once again my heart began to fly, As I stared into the eyes of my soon to be spouse. All he said was “I Love You” That was all I wanted to hear, For me to wipe away all fear. Knowing he loved me, I replied “I Love You Too” *Not a true story, just a sort of fanatasy I suppose*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful fantasy Sierra, you write well and it's so lovely to dream >> James
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Kevin!
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:06:00 AM
well done.. I hope your fantasy comes true some day - Kevin
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:57:00 PM
Thanks Carol and Doris. but no it is not true. I am only 16 years old and am not old enough to get engaged or even have my own house. It was just a sort of fantasy I suppose
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:18:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!! very sweet story!! Hope it is true!!
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:33:00 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Sierra. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael. I got inspired from something I read online and the poem just came to me. I suppose sub-conciously I wish that when I do get engaged my proposal is as romantic as this.
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:15:00 AM
Lovely ramanic write luv.. heartfelt and warm.. Always Michael
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