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So ill shake it off never give it another thought never to realize how much it deeply hurts inside. broken hearts are never to far behind as i sit there  and hide behind a mask trying to  hide what i feel inside. as i remember my past i cant let go so ill just wear a mask.
you see this side of me thats dark and cold then i have a lighter side that i pretend to hold
i cant forgive i wont forget so ill wear a mask so you dont detect that I'm a total wreck. i have goals and dreams that you may think ill achieve but to me i feel like I'm worth nothing
so ill sit there and pretend to boast and really im just a joke. so ill smile and laugh really I'm just wearing a mask. wearing a mask wearing a mask

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  1. Date: 4/2/2013 9:41:00 AM
    - Tristian, you have written a really good poem. - Welcome to P-Soup - hope you get much pleasure to share your thoughts and words in the form of poems here with us! - Good luck. - Continue with your poems, I want to read more from you in the future. - Have a nice sunny day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)"

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:38:00 AM
    Nice write. Welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick