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Marylou

How can I describe me to you? What can I say about Marylou? Spiritual, describes the woman I wish to be. Have I accomplished this successfully? Sentimental as a child---- Throughout the years, mushy, slushy feelings are compiled. Big tears gush from my eyes. Tender stories result in blubbering cries. Friends tell me I'm very shy. I agree, this trait I won't deny. This poem gives you a glimpse into my heart. I am a work in progress, not yet Jehovah's work of art. (This is a swap quatrain.)

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Date: 11/26/2015 1:30:00 PM
Mary,thank you for sharing. Have a great day. Happy Thanksgiving ... Skat
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Mary Swingler
Date: 11/26/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I hope you were able to get some rest. I also hope your sister is progressively getting better.
Date: 11/26/2015 8:30:00 AM
You underestimate His artistic ability. Perhaps if you look a bit closer you will see what Jehovah sees.
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Mary Swingler
Date: 11/26/2015 9:12:00 AM
I pray that never happens. I am not the finished work, but in the future I will be. Jehovah is the examiner of hearts, (Pr.17:3) I trust in him completely> I know he will refine me in harmony with his will.

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