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Maryam

M olded my own world, A cross the skies and seas. R arely landing my ship, for I'm Y earning for real adventure. A sks a million a question, for I'm M aiden in searching my future.

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Date: 3/24/2009 1:40:00 PM

Thank you for giving us a glimpse of yourself in a creative way. Nice use of the acrostic form which is a challenging one. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/22/2009 4:17:00 PM

This is a beautiful Acrostic, Maryam! It is a great insight into "Maryam"! Nice job! Love Robin

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/21/2009 4:12:00 PM

Well done my friendly poetress....an Acrostic view of you....delightful and real! You seem like you are very down to earth and have a young spirit that yearns for excitement and gets it when it's time! Great focus in your execution of every line! Nice poem, your friend always here at the shhhhhoupie! Janer

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/19/2009 6:55:00 AM

This acrostic poem acts like an inviting biology, making your subject one of the great presentations of the form. Love always

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2009 10:34:00 AM

You are a woman to be admired, Maryam. You have great courage to mod your "own world." (I have always sought adventure too.) Great acrostic! It opens the pages of your life. Love, Carolyn

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/14/2009 8:55:00 PM

wonderful acrostic and so revealing of you soul. I really like the last line a lot. Best of luck to you in your searching. Peace, Love and Light be with you always. Smiles from Lolita

Jen H.

Date: 3/14/2009 12:51:00 PM

Another great poem! You are really good at acrostics Maryam! ~Jen~