Marriage

has three rings - Engagement rings, Wedding rings and Sufferings; Like a Violin lover, after the music's over, Ah, attached still are the strings! "Limerick" contest by Jan Allison

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Md Johnson

Date: 5/25/2015 1:12:00 AM

Wow...very clever. Nicely done.

Abdul Malik
Date: 5/25/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thanks Michael! I am still not able to break free of the attached strings.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 5:42:00 PM

Lol I never thought of three rings like that! nicely done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 11:27:00 PM

very clever one, Abdul. Big congrats.

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/30/2015 7:37:00 AM

Your comments 'ring' true!

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2015 8:23:00 PM

Abdul, very clever limerick, congratulations, 7, and thanks for visiting my captcha poem

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/30/2015 7:38:00 AM

Thanks a lot. Appreciate much.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 7:49:00 PM

Hahaah..! Funny :~)a 7 Congratulations on your wonderful win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/30/2015 7:39:00 AM

Aha! It rings the bell for you!

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:22:00 PM

ABDUL, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 4:57:00 PM

Abdul, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2015 4:05:00 PM

Clever humour Abdul - congrats on your 3rd place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/30/2015 7:40:00 AM

Thanks Jan. You took the humor in this.

Judy Konos

Date: 4/26/2015 5:50:00 PM

don't leave out the ring in the nose even when it wasn't popular! good one...thanks

Abdul Malik
Date: 4/27/2015 11:04:00 AM

You got me there! How can I forget 'nose ring'? But then, it will make it serious than humorous! Thanks for your comments Judy.