Marks

Tattoos and whiskey Cigarette marks on her skin Footprints on sand.

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Date: 11/14/2015 10:31:00 PM

Hopefully the footprints are running away from this abuser.

Date: 11/14/2015 2:46:00 PM

mary jane and gin....hiccups and munchies surpreme....passed out on sofa....just a haikued response....but yours is nicely done amrita....;)

Amrita Jha
Date: 11/14/2015 2:57:00 PM

Yours is too! Thank you for the appreciation :)

Date: 10/26/2015 5:21:00 PM

Love it. SKAT

Amrita Jha
Date: 10/31/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT, your encouragement is much needed and appreciated, thanks :)

Date: 10/26/2015 2:16:00 AM

Hi Amrita, well I love everything about the Haiku. From footprints to whiskey. The marks are deep.... I love this haiku. LINDA

Amrita Jha
Date: 10/31/2015 8:02:00 AM

Hi Linda, I'm glad you do. Just an attempt at this form which I'm not much acquainted with. Thanks :)