Market Square

Busy piazza, Amidst angry sun And cacophonous sounds such as, "pipipi peepee" and "bonanza! bonanza!!", Calling all to answer, Nagging market women, Causing palaver. Pedestrians roaming. Every man to his own Yet who knows who? CHARLESMELODY (Lightning Ink).

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/16/2019 3:38:00 AM

thoughtful expression-Every man to his own/ Yet who knows who?

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/21/2019 2:00:00 AM

Thank you so much Martab Bangalee

Anil Deo

Date: 4/13/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks for this PICTURE, Lightning. Shalom shalom- Peace from THE Prince of Peace!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/14/2019 7:22:00 AM

You are welcome sir. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 4/7/2019 6:02:00 AM

I can just about picture it, the color of clothes, the vibrant hues of the produce, the nagging market women, you have brought the market square to life. Awesome write....Maria hugs

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/7/2019 9:05:00 PM

Thank you so much ma. I will do better having such encouragement. :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/6/2019 11:48:00 AM

Charles....You made me feel there...in market Square! You word painted a picture and I could hear every stroke of your brush! Excellent!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/7/2019 1:44:00 AM

Wow.. Thank you Chuck, I am humbled Sir.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 4/6/2019 7:53:00 AM

Wow and that's an intelligent capture of reality :)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/6/2019 7:58:00 AM

THANK you Swetha, i really appreciate.