Marionette

Wooden arms, vanilla legs dance on Prague’s cobblestones, painted eyes haunt the musical sway. Written by Lee Ramage September 23, 2012 For Nette Onclaud’s contest Septolet the Puppet

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Erich Goller

Date: 10/3/2012 3:08:00 PM

congratulation on your win, a beautiful expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2012 12:50:00 AM

Lee, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/28/2012 8:15:00 AM

Big congratulations Lee xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/28/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/27/2012 5:40:00 PM

Very descriptive. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2012 5:09:00 PM

This one was one of my favorites and I would like to have seen it higher placed!! Congrats on your win, Lee.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/27/2012 5:07:00 PM

Vanilla legs" is outstanding. Congrats on your success...BG

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/27/2012 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem. I like the vaniulla legs - mine feel like pudding somedays, and this line made me smile.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2012 1:53:00 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 9/27/2012 1:53:00 PM

Beautifully written!!Loved this Lee.Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2012 10:25:00 PM

CONGRATS LEE ON A TREMENDOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/26/2012 3:09:00 PM

Oh my........how much do I love this....just beautiful, and I can picture it so well. (I would place this higher....just my opinion...) Nicely done, Lee. Congratulations on your win and talent!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2012 9:33:00 PM

wow. one of the best I've seen. I LOVE how you used the flavor of vanilla in yours.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/23/2012 12:48:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading all of the poems for this contest. Every one is special because each poet has thier own arrangement of the 14 words. I like the way you isolated 'haunt' - gives it more power.

Lee Ramage
Date: 9/23/2012 1:14:00 PM

Thanks Joann for your kind words. I find the poems that restrict the number of lines/words are more difficult than others. Appreciate your feedback. Lee