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As his body slowly dwindles His mind sharpens even more But memories, they cloud his thoughts Bringing back his time of war. The doctors describe the causes Brain traumas and distress They say that it’ll get better His life won’t always be such a mess. But what they don’t know how to fix What he can’t explain Is that the battle in Iraq was only the beginning of his pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
Hi Tessa , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2013 11:10:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Tessa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 10:41:00 AM
Tessa, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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