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Maria's Canto

'Maria's Canto' You bestir me, Aztec Princess Awakening me from slumbers forsaken Taking me on the path to your Caribbean haven To my existence you grant sense. Your mind is keen, shown by a sharp intelligence On your countenance, your honey skin a godly sheen In all you've been, as woman and goddess Heaven and Earth will you rule as queen, but to me To me you are the premiere enchantress.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/17/2014 10:18:00 PM

Oh wow great one Conor,, big congrats on win!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/17/2014 8:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win!!

Saba Khan

Date: 7/17/2014 6:58:00 AM

Great win..Congrats :)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/16/2014 8:59:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Conor.. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2014 5:55:00 PM

Conor, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 7/4/2014 8:15:00 AM

What an enchanting romantic read. It's a pleasure reading you. Thank you for sharing!

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera

Date: 6/23/2014 5:07:00 AM

cute poem! Meanwhile W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website CONOR. T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please CONOR cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2014 2:24:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Conor :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2014 9:20:00 PM

Conor,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@