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Marching For Dignity

Medals on frames stood upright and straight, Like guns marching on bloody road to Death March At eighteen, he bore the pellets of war’s cause Fingers wounded by splinters from a grenade Spawned by raw courage for freedom’s glory He counted black hours guarding his troops; Piloting aircraft and landing on muddy swamp Worse was the order to kick his dead friend, Paul. Black nights fed thinner ribs with brisk attacks Riddling air with roulette of mortar sounds, Yet country’s honor soared higher than gray winds A testament for a man of lofty ideals. Tales of grit, battle scars wrapped in dignity A body resting on heroes’ graveyard, our flag rising; Until the end, code of gallantry filled life’s moments Of one general, dear Dad, your spirit walks with me. Poem For Daddy Contest: Leonora Galinta by nette onclaud ....................... *Dedicated to my father who fought bravely during the war and passed on at age 53, embracing love for family and country… I miss you, Dad!

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Date: 3/14/2014 1:51:00 AM
Nette, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:21:00 PM
Your father's honor lives on in your poem of him, to him. Congratulations on your win and on having such a fine father.
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:54:00 AM
A heartfelt poem and tribute to your father Nette, Congrats on your win....Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:33:00 AM
A very touching tribute. congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:33:00 AM
a great tribute of a daughter whose dad was a hero... I salute this poem!! ..Congratulations, nette!! :D]
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Date: 3/13/2014 9:50:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your beloved dad. I'I m sorry he died so young. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:53:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:35:00 AM
A wonderful dedication to one who inspired such a creative write. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Nette . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thanks for this beautiful tribute Nette and congratulations on the win... :)s and hugs Verlena
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:04:00 AM
What a tribute to your father. He would be proud of his little girl
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:58:00 PM
Sorry about your loss. Such a powerful dedication, Nette. Excellent as always!
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:08:00 AM
A great one Nette , I must say I really enjoy it.Immense thanks for all your visits to my page
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Date: 3/6/2014 11:27:00 PM
Impeccably touching...I bow to you for this dedication. Incredible.
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Date: 3/6/2014 11:26:00 AM
- Dear Nette - your father (was) and am so proud of you - A beautiful write for your brave and loving father - (died much too young!!) - Fills my eyes with tears ..... Thank you my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/6/2014 10:58:00 AM
Wonderful tribute write Nette..
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Date: 3/6/2014 7:12:00 AM
Nette - The fact that we share a common bond makes this even MORE compelling than it already is...Beautiful and elegantly written tribute to your father...I sure wish I could have met him and that you could have met my father as well - Tim
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Date: 3/6/2014 7:14:00 AM
And I wish the two of THEM could have met too...
Date: 3/6/2014 5:21:00 AM
Not every father gets the honour of dying for family and country, and a General at that!. Great tribute dear Nette, sorry for your loss . Tiaua
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Date: 3/6/2014 2:38:00 AM
The greatest honour any father could earn would be the love of his children and your father clearly has that still . A beautiful tribute nette.
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Date: 3/5/2014 11:33:00 PM
You have enlightened me by the splendor of this incredible write here this evening! I surely loved reading this powerful poem of your father and his loyalty to family and country! What a significantly heartfelt piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:42:00 PM
Too young to go on..I know that you miss him..Great work honoring your hero..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
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Date: 3/5/2014 4:37:00 PM
Dear Nette: A very lovely tribute. This is for you: "Smiles you remember, Fond touch embracing; Love now engenders, Smiles everlasting!" Our hurts heal with passing time but love is forever. Take comfort in love and light. Leon
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