March

Mingled highs and lows from the weather All around earth gives forth flowers Radiant sun awakens and birds gather Constant change as each tree grows higher Hopeful season of spring; spirit towers Majestic springtime sunrises Amorous hidden feelings spring forth Rapturous aroma surprises Captivating senses of mirth Heavenly days linger, henceforth? Magic moments float into night's prizes Attentive doting companion Rehearses love's verse excited Completely engulfed unabandoned Hauting thoughts float like jasmine

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2015 2:53:00 PM

what a beautiful write

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/14/2015 2:45:00 PM

such a Beautiful rendition....of rebirths firm position....that's when everything comes back....springing forth Beauty to be more exact....;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/14/2015 1:58:00 PM

ohhh, i like your merry month of march and your verses make it even more engaging.. beautiful, sara...birth-date?... huggs

James Peranteau

Date: 8/12/2015 11:17:00 PM

It's hard to write just one stanza on a month filled with mirth and sage ! I don't know if this is fer the contest, I don't seez the note affixed here. Awesome write dear poet ! I's fix'n to go read the write previous, it sparked my attention....much love, james

Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2015 11:03:00 PM

I love your word choice makes the month of May sound so pleasant. A7 hugs Eve

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/12/2015 9:38:00 PM

March is also my birth month, and it always feels like the start of a new year with a birthday and spring arriving at the same time... Your poem paints March's beauty so vividly, Sara. A lovely acrostic!... If this is for the contest, I wish you the best of luck!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2015 8:35:00 PM

Sara, I went to look just now and see if you had another March acrostic entered in the contest, I figured this post was to show more beautiful imagery of your birth month. but it looks like this is your entry? Be careful! She only wanted ONE stanza so if this is for contest, you need to eliminate two of the stanzas and maybe repost this whole thing separately!