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Marathon Mile

He approaches me with want in his eye, “Didn’t we just do this?” I bid with a sigh, I contest that we ventured a marathon mile, His gleam is so perfect with a downward smile. How can I resist such a simple request? The joy beats deeply in his quivering chest, It is me who he chose to share private time, My fruitless resistance is a borderline crime. Excitement is growing as I no longer fight, I rise to the occasion and turn out the light, His tail and wet tongue provide doting talk, I grab the red leash as we go for a walk. …………………………………………………………… Contest Entry: It Was a Beautiful Affair Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Results: 6th Place

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Date: 8/3/2016 2:34:00 PM
Oh, so creative and an absolute delight though I am somewhat surprised Lewis place it based on how disappointed he expressed being that no one dug down into the nitty gritty of why and what emotions went into the affair they wrote about. That's my memory, any way. Regardless, the poem is adorable. CayCay
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:14:00 AM
Congrats Jesse, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/10/2016 6:50:00 PM
Congrats 38Jesse to win top place
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:14:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/10/2016 1:55:00 PM
Wonderful win, Jesse. Skat
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, Skat!
Date: 7/10/2016 12:39:00 PM
I love this one. Congrats on your win, Jesse. Janice
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:12:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/11/2016 12:59:00 PM
- Enjoy the walk with your faithful friend :) - Good luck in the contest, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/11/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. My Husky is quite awesome - he loves to sing! :) Jesse
Date: 6/9/2016 7:02:00 PM
You had me going there, Jesse! Great poem, very well-done. Janice
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/10/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thank you! - Jesse

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