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Marathon Drops

MARATHON DROPS marathon drops jazz over leaves, roof and human spray awhile but later flood oozing lightning rush like smooch bearing tragic trance nature's warn to mankind faults? (c) Olive Eloisa 9:08 pm September 19, 2014 ***This a tiny poem describing one condition brought about by typhoons to our Country: Philippines.. Sponsor Dr.Ram Mehta Contest Name Choka Me 6rh place.. :)

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Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/28/2014 4:19:00 AM

Congrats for your win dear. Hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:56:00 AM

thanks Malik.. :) God bless you.. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 1:49:00 AM

bagyong panalo.. cheers on your stunning win, dear eloi.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:50:00 AM

thanks much Nette :) appreciate your drop by.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:36:00 PM

Hey, sweetie, How are you tonight? It's nice seeing you with a win here. Congratulations, and keep those poems coming.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:49:00 AM

Im trying too Andie.. :) meskeen wasn;t able to make it to your contest.. :( thanks for the support

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/27/2014 2:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Olive...great description.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:47:00 AM

thanks much Faye.. :) Appreciate it.. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 8:44:00 AM

So sorry for the people effected. Congrats on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:45:00 AM

yhanks much Richard. :) I appreciate it.. :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2014 1:22:00 AM

Thanks much Maurice..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 5:38:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2014 1:21:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram..:) appreciate it..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/21/2014 6:32:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi....hope the bad weather is not being to harsh with you. Typhoons can cause havoc and be fatal. Take care. I am amazed at the new forms which you are tackling with so much enthusiasm! hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 9/27/2014 4:54:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi!! Congratulations on your win. Once again we stand next to each other on the winners' list!! Better to avoid the typhoons...so best to meet by the Eiffel Tower for a treat:)) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/22/2014 12:43:00 AM

Thanks much Paul ..:) glad you like it..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2014 10:09:00 PM

I"ve heard of all the mayhem the typhoons are causing you over there. Sorry you are getting that stuff. That first line of your poem is so original!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/20/2014 11:58:00 PM

Thanks much Andrea.. :) I appreciate your comment.. :) my first line I can't find a word to describe the "strong full volume rain", and came my mind the marathon in sports where there's lots of events requiring strength and endurance, and so that line...

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/20/2014 1:32:00 AM

Superlatively written Olive... Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/20/2014 7:30:00 AM

Thank Verlena..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2014 6:13:00 PM

Hello Olive, this is deep, and swallows my soul.... I had no idea, ... This tiny poem, shows, much of nature and her warnings.... Love Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/20/2014 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Lollie Linda..:) God bless you always..:)