Maple Leaves

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Maple leaves bright red Fall breezes remove loose stems 'Pon the ground now rest Like red leather gloves fit hand Leaves conform to earth's surface

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Hazel Connelly

Date: 10/15/2012 1:53:00 PM

I love the Red Maple and Red Leather gloves. :-) Great.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 1:07:00 AM

Great imagery, Sara.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/11/2012 6:39:00 PM

Very nice. I love the 'Pon in lieu of Upon. Well written

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2012 5:44:00 PM

You are getting very good with these Tankas! They are a lot of fun aren't they...addicting I have to admit! I went through a Tanka phase where that's all I wrote, you probably remember that! But it was so much fun, as I'm sure you are noticing yourself how much fun it is! You are doing very well with these! I am enjoying reading them my friend! Keep them up, they are wondrous! Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/11/2012 5:23:00 PM

I love the images of red, in the leaves and the gloves, very autumnal.