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Maple Leaf

I watched a maple leaf’s descent to ground. It’s downward swaying motion, every now And then a pirouette without a sound until it came to rest so gently down. I asked myself: A life so brief and yet So beautiful, is life to be defined By lasting time and taken for granted? To go around in circles disinclined To find profundity-Sad existence! Ah! But the leaf, its purpose foreordained: To live a measured life, a subsistence Profound in many ways and unrestrained. To waste a lengthy life, so incomplete I’d sooner live my life a maple leaf.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/8/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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Date: 1/1/2010 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations Albert Ahearn, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "Maple Leaf". Wow! It is a profound sonnet. Excellent. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/27/2009 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your first round. A very nice write. Good luck on the next round. Caryl
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Date: 12/25/2009 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your first round win Albert. And good luck on the next round. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/22/2009 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Albert. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet with a very profound message. Best wishes, dear Albert on this going through to the final round. Lainie
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Date: 12/20/2009 4:26:00 PM
Albert congrats on winning first round of ps contest!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Albert! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:19:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 5/29/2009 7:33:00 AM
I enjoyed your sonnet; very elegant and thoughtful. Thanks.
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