Mansions

MANSIONS Where the sun doesn’t shine there is shadow Or there is night Darkness thirsting for the moon Or heaven’s blessed light Dave Austin

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Joe Maverick

Date: 11/25/2015 3:07:00 PM

I'd like a room in there Daver.' and one with a view..'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2015 7:43:00 PM

Daver, you had not seen In Deaths' Dreams before. So I am glad you saw it and liked it! Today was a nice warm day in Utah. How about in YOUR neck of the woods?

Daver Austin
Date: 7/19/2015 11:06:00 AM

I roasted! Went to the grocery store early morning to keep out of the 90 degree temperature. So glad you enjoyed better weather. Love, daver

Elaine George

Date: 7/17/2015 10:03:00 PM

Boy! This one really makes you stop and think. Very profound Dave. Dropping in to visit some of my old and dearest friends. I am still working on the book...it is truly a labor of love. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2015 9:49:00 PM

I REALLY LIKE this one a lot, Daver!! You rhymed it!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/16/2015 12:07:00 AM

The darkness does need a little light to accompany it at times... Nice imagery in this well written poem, Daver!