Man's Influence
L ong ago man became
I nfluenced by a
V ivacious creature who
E njoyed his extraordinary vigor for life
L uck had it; she was made from his rib
A mong other parts thrown in here and there
U ndermining his great influence with other creatures, this
G orgeous woman, as she was called
H ad a powerful control over this man
L ike it or not, he went under her spell
O blivious to what God said about the apple, he took a bite
V aluing his reputation, he hide from God, ashamed that he
E ven let a woman tell him what to do
Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © Caryl Muzzey | Year Posted 2010
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