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Manna From Heaven

The crocs were lined around the rim, catching a nap after their swim, until hearing, "Wake up guys, supper's falling from the skies. I'll race you for a share of him". Inspired by Carolyn' contest 4th place

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/17/2010 4:17:00 PM

I like this and the title is winning. I could see a berserk version of this on Benny Hill or Saturday Night Live. Regards, Gerard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2010 7:41:00 PM

congratulations on your great win, Joyce!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 7:05:00 AM

Congrats on then4th place win.

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 9:28:00 PM

Congratulations Joyce on your num cuatro. Agpt, Moses

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 2:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Joyce! And thanks for leaving comments on my Haiku! Means a lot! JA

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 7/13/2010 1:24:00 PM

Oh-ohooo...sounds like trouble for someone; ) Congrats on your win!

James Fraser

Date: 7/13/2010 11:12:00 AM

Haha, I like it Joyce. You have me giggling here. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/13/2010 6:45:00 AM

Congrats, Joyce. Nice write. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 4:38:00 AM

Limericks are an excellent genre for you, Joyce. Congratulations on your win! There were many witty entries. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/12/2010 1:45:00 AM

Oh no!! I sure wouldn't want to be their supper-- this is really a wonderful limerick for the contest! "Manna from heaven" indeed! -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 8:35:00 PM

Nice one Joyce ..good luck in the contest.. thankxxx for your nice comments .. glad u enjoyed the Haiku contest.. a collaboration contest is in the works also.. so keep your creative pen flowing... my friend.. with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 7:40:00 PM

A unique interpretation of the picture, Carie. Good luck

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/11/2010 6:51:00 PM

Fantastic Joyce! Wonderful write!~Tirzah~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 5:31:00 PM

Hey, this is really awesome. I am so stupid I could not tell those were alligators in the picture. haha. I hope this wins big. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2010 4:17:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one ....Sara

James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2010 3:19:00 PM

Oh my Joyce, I think your names on the winners podium with this witty Limerick. I can't wait to see the entries in Carolyn's contest. Thank you for your always kind comments >> James