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Mankind's Rainbow

Light pierces the clouds Solace found on dreary days Living and sharing As our Creator intends Pure love, unconditional All men are equal Only perception differs Listen to your heart Find joy in diversity Revel in mankind’s rainbow

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/3/2011 11:40:00 AM

Good thoughts, poetically expressed. A deserving winner! xoxo Robert.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/29/2011 7:52:00 PM

Congratulations and jubilation, Carolyn with this beautiful poem that deserves to look down on all of us below :-)

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/29/2011 4:27:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Thank you for penning such kind thoughts. Lee

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2011 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 7/28/2011 3:44:00 PM

So true the above words Carolyn....congrats on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/28/2011 3:26:00 PM

Oh LNC..another feather in your artistic cap..hope to have my phone this weekend..will call..congrats. BG

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/28/2011 3:26:00 PM

congratulations on a well deserved win Carolyn....I particularly like "revel in mankind's rainbow"....the different races and beliefs etc...an excellent image.....balanced with the first lines and the light piercng the dreary clouds.....very very clever arrangement....nicely done.......all my best wishes as always

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/28/2011 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win Carolyn :) lfde Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/27/2011 8:08:00 PM

Yeah! Carolyn! congrad's on your win glad to be here with you! Light & Love

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/27/2011 3:35:00 PM

congratulations....a well-deserved win...~~~~smile~~~~*_* junjun

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 7/27/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win with this beautiful entry!!!!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2011 2:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Mose's "Best Shot" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 7/27/2011 2:16:00 PM

Beautiful. Many congrats on all your wins, Carolyn : ) I'll try to post a few poems tonight

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/27/2011 1:40:00 PM

very very nice...well done Carolyn

Emma Mantle

Date: 7/27/2011 1:37:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, best wishes Em :)

Rick Parise

Date: 7/27/2011 12:58:00 PM

Congrats to you!!!!!!I see inspiration has been found, not only by me!!!!!///Beautiful///God bless

David Williams

Date: 7/27/2011 12:29:00 PM

hey carolyn , congrats on your great win, David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/27/2011 12:22:00 PM

topping the charts, yes, yes carols..fireworks of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2011 11:52:00 AM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Carolyn

Bob Quigley

Date: 7/27/2011 11:28:00 AM

Excellent Carolyn. You definitely gave it your best shot. Congrats on the win.

John Freeman

Date: 7/27/2011 11:26:00 AM

Carolyn, The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/25/2011 11:54:00 AM

That last line sure leaves such a lasting impression, Carolyn! I hope all is well with you :) and yup haha this Soup addiction sure is hard to get out of ;) hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 3:04:00 PM

Yes, indeed. Lovely inspiring piece, my friend. I'll be back tomorrow to read some more of your poems. Thanks - your contest was a lot of fun : )

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/23/2011 3:02:00 PM

wonderful poetry and insight that is sometimes hard to live by moi .... but hopefully practice makes perfect..? John will love this one. I keep wanting to enter another contest but life gets in the way. I;ll get there. ..Oh yeah, I want to thank you for your chiropractics comment that got me off my duff and inspired me to finish a poem started a while ago and forgotten. Ode to my Chiro. Thanks Carolyn. Have a great one

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/23/2011 11:46:00 AM

did you know that the rainbow is Gods signature? john